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Rain



I stand here, waiting. Waiting for someone to find me. But I see no one.
I am alone… no one to talk to… I would see my friends if it was sunny out.
But they are all inside, avoiding the torrent. I see someone walk up to me and smile. Her red hair in a mess from the rain. 'Come on' she would say. I did not listen. 'Why are you out here?' she asked. I just blinked. 'I was waiting for you' I would say. She started walking off and I would follow. That was the past. Now the rain falls and she does not come. Tears as well as rain came down my face. I would wipe them away but my face would just get wet again… I await the day that she comes and smiles at me again… but that day was far away as far as I knew… if she comes, I will be content again. Until then; I stand alone in everlasting torrent…
just a bit of poetry on sonic:writersblock:
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:iconhopeisnotdead:
hopeisnotdead Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
So beautiful T.T
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sonsal300 Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
danka! nice animated amy icon
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:iconhopeisnotdead:
hopeisnotdead Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks, but I didn't make it though ^^;
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sonsal300 Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
so? i didn't make my icon either
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:iconhopeisnotdead:
hopeisnotdead Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Lot's o'people don't make their icon, but the deviant who made mine only asked that I just should not take credit for it. That's what I did :shrug: 
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sonsal300 Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
okay
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CooI Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
wow that's amazing O_O
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sonsal300 Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
thank you!
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Sikathesoul Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2012
:iconcryforeverplz: S-Sorry...It's really Beautiful! :heart:
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sonsal300 Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:( it's fine! i wrote this during a rainy day and it is a pretty sad poem!:hug:
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